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DezoPenguin wrote:Nao wrote:Giving In by Centauri2002.That's all.Very much seconded! While I regret that she felt the need to drift into Shizuru apologia in the final chapter, this is not only the most erotic ShizNat fics I've encountered, but also one of the best post-Festival romances.
Nao wrote:Giving In by Centauri2002.That's all.
May 20 11 6:40 AM
May 20 11 8:46 AM
Centauri2002 wrote:DezoPenguin wrote:Nao wrote:Giving In by Centauri2002.That's all.Very much seconded! While I regret that she felt the need to drift into Shizuru apologia in the final chapter, this is not only the most erotic ShizNat fics I've encountered, but also one of the best post-Festival romances.I just felt the need to point out that it was never my intention to portray any kind of Shizuru apologia. I wasn't defending her actions, as such, and Shizuru certainly condemns them herself. Natsuki's dismissal of them is only an attempt to be supportive and move beyond them. I was more focused on their emotional progression throughout the story than their actions in the past. It just so happens that the two were closely linked.Then again, I don't mind other interpretations of it. Readers can feel free to take whatever meaning they wish from it. I just thought I'd clear up what my intentions were whilst writing it.
Shizuru's eyes closed as the sting of memories flooded her mind. "The Carnival," was all she could say.
"That wasn't you." Natsuki's words were soft and reassuring but Shizuru couldn't help but feel they were cruel.
"But it was..." Shizuru whispered.
hands slipped down to the Kyoto woman's shoulders now and she gently
shook her, forcing Shizuru to open her eyes. "The Carnival made us all
do crazy things. We were manipulated. How was that your fault?"
it be nice if I could be absolved of all responsibility? But I cannot."
Her tone had become firm now as she resolved to go on and finish what
she was saying. "I wasn't being forced to kiss you when you were asleep,
that was my own yearning. I wasn't being forced to strike down those
who had harmed you; that is very much my own wish. My desire to keep you
safe and to have you all to myself is an all-consuming thing. I fear
that I will become that demon again, Natsuki."
"So that's what
this is about?" the other woman asked although it was clear she didn't
need an answer. She wasn't looking at her in either disgust or pity, as
Shizuru had feared, but there was a fondness in her eyes. A kindness.
"It doesn't matter;" she said softly.
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